So I had these two selected by my teacher of the 17 below. I had to do some revisions to make them into better film shots. My biggest critique was making sure there was enough negative (empty) space around my subject matter. More neg space means it's easier to read visually!
So of the 2 above I've selected #2 "Chime" to blow up and completely rough out and then clean. Once thats done I'll post them both!